I like this, it is subtle and I love the line ‘ I moved in’, for me, as a reader taking possession of your words it feels like the narrator gave themselves license to be free and ok with being their own person. This captures the ending of something very concisely. Much enjoyed.
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I like this, it is subtle and I love the line ‘ I moved in’, for me, as a reader taking possession of your words it feels like the narrator gave themselves license to be free and ok with being their own person. This captures the ending of something very concisely. Much enjoyed.
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Thank you very much! You understand the poem as it was written.
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